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Post by Isaac Cornelius III on May 20, 2015 22:50:24 GMT -8
The first show is finally in the books ladies and gents. Especially considering that this is my first time writing in this style I'd like to know what everyone thought for the show?
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Post by Drew Stevenson on May 21, 2015 1:01:39 GMT -8
Damn good results brother!
I think you have really made the summarized results look good. There's enough there yet I can still use my imagination as to how the entire match unfolded; great stuff and I think I'll really like these summarized results better.
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Post by DOOM on May 21, 2015 4:43:58 GMT -8
Yeah, I agree with Drew on this one. The summarized results are easier to read, but still contain enough content to keep it interesting. It's not just some lines and a winner. You can still tell some character out of the small bits. Good work. Also, damn, Stevenson, breaking your brotha's leg like that? Jesus.
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Post by Deleted on May 21, 2015 6:42:41 GMT -8
Great results!
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Post by Gio DeFalco on May 21, 2015 9:37:39 GMT -8
Damn these results were awesome, nice work.
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Post by Drew Stevenson on May 21, 2015 13:57:15 GMT -8
Frank didn't tap, so Drew broke him -- his own fault.
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Post by Dash Miles on May 21, 2015 15:19:05 GMT -8
Good show. The summarized results were top notch. Can't wait for more.
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Post by Silas Romero on May 21, 2015 15:23:34 GMT -8
I wasn't sure if I was going to like the summary format, but it actually works. A couple feds I've been in couldn't pull that style off, so I was a bit scared. You were able to work in character traits and still keep it short to the point.. Good stuff, man.
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Post by devilsaint on May 21, 2015 17:06:33 GMT -8
The results were grand. On a sidenote, the Canadian Maple Leaf > Missouri Cloverleaf/Career Killer.
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